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[Dick Gabriel <RPG@SAIL.Stanford.EDU>]

[In reply to message from chapman@tle.enet.dec.com sent Fri, 3 Nov 89 07:46:50 -0800.]

Kathy writes:

  I'm not trying to minimize the amount of work that needs to be done, but
  we have to stop wordsmithing and rearranging at some point.

Most of the changes I made to draft were structural and strategic (how to
approach explaining some point). Unless everyone else believes the
structure and strategy of explanation are good enough, I will continue
to push for those aspects to be correct.  I think we cannot simply paste
in the cleanups and hope for the best. If this is all we can do, maybe we
should give up.

			-rpg-